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Offline Wulamoc

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First hunt this year
« on: October 04, 2009, 10:50:33 pm »
Finally made it into the wood
With stick and string I knew I could
shoot the deer and make some meat
So I stood and sat and stared through trees.
The rain did fall, and wet was I
As clouds floated through October skies.

Saturday morning was here and gone.
We had some lunch and when we were done
We headed back into the field
Still looking for my first deer yield.
It was dismal I must confess,
The rain was making all a mess.

At six O'Clock the skies did clear
At seven a nice doe appeared.
I heard a buck behind her snort
And she proceeded but came up short.
At thirty yards she stared at me
And stomped her feet
At what she could not see.

Another doe! A bigger girl
Another snort behind her still.
A third snort called them to the wood
The first doe stalled, I thought she would
Close the gap, I willed her to.
But the buck and doe had called her too.

Thirty yards, not close enough
This hunting game , it sure is tough.
What fun I had, that's to be sure!
And I'll go again to hunt those deer
And maybe, just maybe in coming years
I'll finally get to shoot my first deer! ;)

God bless you all!!!
 
And God was with the lad; and he grew, and dwelt in the wilderness, and became an archer. GEN-21:20

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Offline boo

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Re: First hunt this year
« Reply #1 on: October 05, 2009, 12:03:57 am »
Nice, i liked it. Its sums up a couple hunts ive had already this year.
Boo

Offline Pat B

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Re: First hunt this year
« Reply #2 on: October 05, 2009, 12:09:51 am »
You nailed it!!!   Send it to Ed Ingold for Primitive Archer Magazine.  8)
Make the most of all that comes and the least of all that goes!    Pat Brennan  Brevard, NC

Offline Pappy

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Re: First hunt this year
« Reply #3 on: October 05, 2009, 06:33:38 am »
Very good,well said. :)
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Offline Wulamoc

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Re: First hunt this year
« Reply #4 on: October 05, 2009, 07:09:22 pm »
You guys are too cool!
And God was with the lad; and he grew, and dwelt in the wilderness, and became an archer. GEN-21:20

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Offline chasing crow

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Re: First hunt this year
« Reply #5 on: October 06, 2009, 06:23:21 am »
Beautiful!
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Offline Wulamoc

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Re: First hunt this year
« Reply #6 on: October 06, 2009, 10:53:46 pm »
Sent to Mr. Ingold as you suggested, Pat.
And God was with the lad; and he grew, and dwelt in the wilderness, and became an archer. GEN-21:20

Michigan

Offline Pat B

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Re: First hunt this year
« Reply #7 on: October 06, 2009, 10:59:49 pm »
 8)
Make the most of all that comes and the least of all that goes!    Pat Brennan  Brevard, NC

Offline sweeney3

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Re: First hunt this year
« Reply #8 on: October 13, 2009, 12:57:33 pm »
Nice wordsmithing.

Offline BearG

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Re: First hunt this year
« Reply #9 on: October 13, 2009, 02:55:57 pm »
Man that was good
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